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TERM 4 WRITING

CHARACTER WRITING

Onisty 30/11/09 Character Writing

Planning = Shannon Short spiked up black hair maori, tanned skin, tattoo’s, funny, gets alone with people, likes drinking tea and coffee medium, thin,honest, Bubbly personality, supportive, leader of the camp good tube rafter, helpful person,Challenger loves the river, good swimmer,

Shannon

Shannon was a leader at camp that encouraged people to give things a go that they haven’t done or afraid to do. Shannon was alway there for people that needed help, and a very supportive person. As much as Shannon gave things a go he loved going down to the river and swimming with the children. On a misty foggy day he would still want to get out side and do the activites. Shannon loved to do tube rafting for one of the activities that he did at camp, and just sitting back in the shade drinking a cup of tea or coffee.

Shannon has browny tanned skin, and black spiked up hair that helped make his tattoo’s stand out better on his legs and arms, He is medium sized built and quite tall. He liked mucking around while people were trying to do their best at things like throwing slime out of the river onto your face when you tube rafted past him.

These days adults would rather stay inside or have a couple of drinks while shannon would be outside playing with the children, I think he was a good leader at camp and should stay as a leader to teach other students.

by onisty jensen